How To Write A Letter Draft And Publish

 WALT -  We are learning to write a Thank you letter. ✓

I wrote to my friends dad.

November 24 2020. ← Date

Dear Kape/ Mr.Murray.  ← Greeting                      

Thank you for being  great supervisors while our class (Te Kauru) were enjoying planting the recently cut down trees. Because you were there we could actually go on our trip. For me that’s how you really helped our class. My favourite part was seeing a lot of the people in my class have lots of fun                         ↑

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Closing ↙

Regards:

Lucas

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November 24 2020.

Dear Kape/ Mr.Murray.                    

Thank you for being a great supervisor while our class (Te Kauru) were enjoying planting at Lake Ngatu at the site of where the big trees were recently cut down . Because you were there we could actually help plant the tree seedlings. For me that’s how you really helped our class. My favourite part was seeing a lot of the people in my class have lots of fun.                       

Regards

Lucas

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