Under the bed

WALT: we are learning to use descriptive vocab in our writing .




This is work I have written and edited myself . It is still a work in progress .






                         Under The Bed



As Junior drifted off to sleep in his Lighting Mcqueen Pjs , he heard




either a cat meowing , a dog barking , a monster scratching , or his dad snoring




. He pulled out his favourite teddies for protection and did his one and only




Superman dive under his bed then he realized that it couldn't have been his dad




because he was not sleeping “hmm” junior thought . He crawled a little bit




further and saw what was a mixture of a cat meowing , a dog barking , a




monster scratching but not his dad snoring . At this moment in time he thought




his eyes were going to pop out of his head , “ping” his head went . I need cat




Food , dog food and monster food . A couple weeks later his cat




Food , dog food and monster food arrived . he ran to the kitchen mashed the cat




food ,Dod food and the monster food together then put in a bowl and placed it




In front of his bed and waited . He fell asleep then heard loud thudding from his




Bed , he ran and said “ holy guacamole” .



This piece of writing was very fun and I found this very easy because you could use your imagination.




Have you ever used Pobble before and if yes how many sentences did you write